My best friend
First of all, my best fiend, is the best friend I ever had. She is always there for me when I need her. She is always making me laugh when I’m sad or I had a problem. She is always giving me good advice on what is wrong and what is the right thing for me. She don’t let me fall when I had a problem. she is always holding my hand so I wont get lost. She is always protecting me from bad things like, fights. Secondly, my best friend had showing me that a friend is like a rose you need to take care of it or it would died and you would never had one the same. My best friend and I love to spend time together. We go shopping or dancing. In fact, we like to do the same things; for example we love to shop and play sports. Also we like the same clothe and the same food. Finally, she is one of the best friends I have had in all my life. She is a very good friend. She is like a sister for me.
Final Draft
First of all, my best friend, is the best friend I ever had. She is always there for me when I need her. She is always making me laugh when I’m sad or I had a problem. She is always giving me good advice on what is wrong and what is the right thing for me. She don’t let me fall when I had a problem. she is always holding my hand so I wont get lost. She is always protecting me from bad things like, fights. Secondly, my best friend had showing me that a friend is like a rose you need to take care of it or it would died and you would never had one the same. My best friend and I love to spend time together. We go shopping or dancing. In fact, we like to do the same things; for example we love to shop and play sports. Also we like the same clothe and the same food. Finally, she is one of the best friends I have had in all my life. She is a very good friend. She is like a sister for me.
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