Lidiana Chavez

ENG061

October 26, 2005

Essay #3

Step 1: Prewriting by brainstorming

Step 2: Outline

I. Topic Sentence: The hurricanes consist of rainy and windy.

A. The windy destroyed several things in the city.

B. The hurricanes cause floods.

C. The hurricanes cause river bed.

II. Conclusion: The hurricanes affect in different aspects the cities.

Step 3: Rough Draft

Generally, the hurricanes start by the wind, rain. The wind destroys trees, houses, cars, stores, hotels, schools, churches, and stadiums. Sometimes, stadiums are in good conditions the city used them as refugees. People are not able to do everything they need to do such as go to work and go to school. Entire families suffer shortage of food and clothing. The hurricanes cause floods in the houses and cities. The hurricanes cause river bed the rain goes on for a long time.

Final Draft

Generally, the hurricanes start by the wind and rain. (CP) Moreover, the wind destroys trees, houses, cars, stores, hotels, schools, churches, and stadiums. (CP) When stadiums are in good conditions the city used them as refugees. (CX) In addition, people are not able to do everything they need to do such as go to work and go to school. (CP) Also, entire families suffer shortage of food and clothing. (CP) The hurricanes cause floods in the houses or cities. (CP) The hurricanes cause river bed because the rain goes on for a long time. (CX) The hurricanes cause diverse damages in the cities. (S)

The hurricanes consist of rainy and windy. The windy destroyed several things in the city. The hurricanes cause floods. The hurricanes cause river bed. The hurricanes affect in different aspects the cities. Generally, the hurricanes start by the wind and rain, the wind destroys trees, houses, cars, stores, hotels, schools, churches, and stadiums. When Sometimes stadiums are in good conditions the city used them as refugees. In addition, People are not able to do everything they need to do such as go to work and go to school. Also, entire families suffer shortage of food or clothing. The hurricanes cause floods in the houses and cities. The hurricanes cause river bed because the rain goes on for a long time. Generally, the hurricanes start by the wind and rain. (CP) Moreover, the wind destroys trees, houses, cars, stores, hotels, schools, churches, and stadiums. (CP) When stadiums are in good conditions the city used them as refugees. (CX) In addition, people are not able to do everything they need to do such as go to work and go to school. (CP) Also, entire families suffer shortage of food and clothing. (CP) The hurricanes cause floods in the houses or cities. (CP) The hurricanes cause river bed because the rain goes on for a long time. (CX) The hurricanes cause diverse damages in the cities. (S)